you should work on that synth starting at 1:00. It does not fit too well to the rest.
maybe make the bassline more interesting. I think the song sounds a bit boring. You can maybe change this by adding some sort of breaks or "surprise elements".
Simple but good. Great for a menu theme in a game.
A piano wich sounds like a midi-piano is always bad.
Yeah, you're totally right.
I think this is some great stuff for some funny games.
there were some effects which sounded a bit strange and it comes to an end a way too surprising. So -2 Start for that.
But I think it's great.
Thanks for the review! i plan on adding a more solid ending soon.
Sounds like an intro
Until 2:24 it sounded like an intro of a song
That does not really help me improve, but thanks anyway.
- too short
- beat is not "hard" enough
- not full 8 bit
the only thing I can suggest you is to not change the beat. Mabye the sound for the melody isn't the best. And it is a bit monotone.
Thank! I've been waiting for someone to finally give me some advice, since I've had no idea what is wrong!!!
you're good at creating a nice melody but the sound engineering destroys it. The instruments are like they are wrong here in this song or the configuration is just wrong.
Fix that and you'll get more stars ;-)
Where can I get the original? I googled for it but found nothing
You have't found beacause it's probably not out there :P I can uppload it on a sharingsite for you. I will PM the URL when I have upploaded it:)
15 notes: so you needed for every note ca. 1 minute?
It's not a good loop. The start and the end don't fit very well together.
If you had one more audio track inside I would give you 3 or 4 stars
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