Bomberzocker's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[dark clouds]

you should work on that synth starting at 1:00. It does not fit too well to the rest.
maybe make the bassline more interesting. I think the song sounds a bit boring. You can maybe change this by adding some sort of breaks or "surprise elements".

[The Spoon Comes To Life]

Simple but good. Great for a menu theme in a game.

[The next step]

A piano wich sounds like a midi-piano is always bad.

bolisa responds:

Yeah, you're totally right.

[Window_song_by_Rabbit]

Great!

I think this is some great stuff for some funny games.
there were some effects which sounded a bit strange and it comes to an end a way too surprising. So -2 Start for that.
But I think it's great.

dr-vibe responds:

Thanks for the review! i plan on adding a more solid ending soon.

[Cliff's Song]

Sounds like an intro

Until 2:24 it sounded like an intro of a song

Technosaur responds:

That does not really help me improve, but thanks anyway.

[Russian Privjet (8 Bit LOOP)]

my summary

10
- too short
- beat is not "hard" enough
- not full 8 bit
- melody
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6 Stars

[Rave on a Pyramid]

Advice?

the only thing I can suggest you is to not change the beat. Mabye the sound for the melody isn't the best. And it is a bit monotone.

Ninjamurai responds:

Thank! I've been waiting for someone to finally give me some advice, since I've had no idea what is wrong!!!

[Soul2Soul]

hmm

you're good at creating a nice melody but the sound engineering destroys it. The instruments are like they are wrong here in this song or the configuration is just wrong.
Fix that and you'll get more stars ;-)

[Laws of Gravity(NG cut)]

Where?

Where can I get the original? I googled for it but found nothing

EOT responds:

You have't found beacause it's probably not out there :P I can uppload it on a sharingsite for you. I will PM the URL when I have upploaded it:)

-EOT

[Sunshine (8-bit)]

hmm

15 notes: so you needed for every note ca. 1 minute?
It's not a good loop. The start and the end don't fit very well together.
If you had one more audio track inside I would give you 3 or 4 stars